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Post by Kiyoka on Jun 8, 2004 19:05:49 GMT -5
*ahem* I have a question... which I reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaally need an answer to. I'm a Kiyone fan and not even I can think of anything currently. *sniffs*
The question: How would Kiyone first react to 7 year older version of herself (from the future ). Right now I don't exacly know how she accidently see's or bumps into her older self. What would be her first reaction? What would she say? At this point everyone knows and then suddenly Kiyone see's this very familer face.
Usually I can figure things out but this... I am stuck on and need help. Please?
Oh and if you're asking if this is from a fanfiction, yeah, mine... still planning it *falls over*
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Post by Iltzafein on Jul 6, 2004 21:30:13 GMT -5
That's a fairly broad question to act but I'll do what I can.
First, we take into account Kiyone's reaction to her future-self based on say; physical look, outfit, posture, and facial looks for starters.
Physical look: Kiyone could react to this in a # of ways. One could be shock (maybe she became more beautiful or possibly much older looking due to pressure and stress.) or casual confirmation she still looks the same as she does now and feels no effect there.
Outfit: Kiyone could also feel shock at this if the clothes represent the image of a higher rank within GP which would be quite the surprise considering she gets looker over a lot.
Posture and facial looks: Here, it could be confusion, anger, sadness, shockingness, and maybe embarassment due to the many revealing looks one can use to express personality and opinion with body language.
That's just an idea which I can't really processs without a situation. The problem is unless you create the future Kiyone, how do you prepare the past Kiyone without a future to refer to?
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Post by Kiyoka on Jul 7, 2004 17:00:54 GMT -5
Your last sentance confused me  But as for the situation, I'm sure this will help you! Everyone is in the main room talking when suddenly MihoKiyo arrive back from patrol and for a visit. Washu panics and in a rush shoves the older Kiyone in a closet (or something similar) and Kiyone's a bit suspicious when she walks in and everyone looks quite nervous. Noboyuki comes back from work and opens the closet to hang his stuff. The older Kiyone who had her ear to the door (leaning on it) falls flat on her face. And Kiyone's reaction?  |
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Post by Iltzafein on Jul 7, 2004 21:25:57 GMT -5
Your last sentance confused me What I meant was that if you have no Future Kiyone made up for story preperation then it would be really hard to imagine how Past Kiyone would react to some Kiyone from the future. As for your event, let's see how this works.... Kiyone sees her older self on the floor, most likely becomes shocked at seeing a duplicate of herself lying on the floor. She might say "Who the hell are you?", "Am I dreaming things?", "What is going on here?" and so on and so on. Her eyes in this case would probably bulge a bit and mouth might be left open for a few seconds before regaining herself. That's as far as I can go at the moment, but I'm sure you can carry it from here Kiyone. Be creative and don't worry too much about originality.  |
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Post by Kiyoka on Jul 8, 2004 6:01:54 GMT -5
Hehe alright I'll do my best!
Well if you mean image wise for the future Kiyone I'm just using her Tenchi forever style since she looks a BIT older there.
EDIT: And I already have the future one's personality sorted.
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Post by Iltzafein on Jul 8, 2004 21:23:08 GMT -5
Let me know when your finished please, I'd like to take a look.
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Post by Kiyoka on Jul 9, 2004 5:18:31 GMT -5
Ok! I'll post the chapters here, so don't worry >=)
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Post by Iltzafein on Jul 10, 2004 21:17:54 GMT -5
Sweet. I look forward to it. |
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